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Awards and honours

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Hello all

I have expanded the list of awards White received. I have presented the information more concisely and have removed some editorial comment about the reason White resigned from the Order of Australia which is discussed elsewhere in the article.

Happy to discuss Aemilius Adolphin (talk) 23:01, 4 August 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Religious and political views

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I have changed the heading Private Life to Religious and Political views as this better reflects the content. I have expanded the content and changed some of the wording of existing content to more accurately reflect the cited sources. I have moved content about religious themes in White's writing to the themes and style section where it more logically belongs.

Happy to discuss. Aemilius Adolphin (talk) 03:27, 6 August 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Nobel laureate

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I have added a section on White's life and career from the Nobel Prize in 1973. Marr and White himself said the Nobel Prize was a turning point in his career so it is logical to make this period a separate section. I have replaced unsourced and poorly sourced content with reliably sourced content. I have replaced some tangential content about other people with more detail on White's life and work during the period.

Happy to discuss. Aemilius Adolphin (talk) 01:18, 10 August 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Return to Australia

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I have changed the heading to Return to Australia as White always said his return was a turning point in his life. I have expanded the content. I have replaced unsourced and pooly sourced content with reliably sourced content. I have replaced some tangential content about other people with more detail on White's life and work during the period.

Happy to discuss. Aemilius Adolphin (talk) 02:08, 19 August 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Europe, America and war

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I have changed the heading from "Travelling the World" to Europe, America and war". The previous heading sounded like White was on a long holiday rather than working and fighting Nazis. I have expanded the content. I have replaced unsourced and pooly sourced content with reliably sourced content. I have corrected some errors of fact and replaced some tangential content.

Happy to discuss. Aemilius Adolphin (talk) 23:54, 20 August 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Childhood and adolescence

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I have replaced some poorly sourced and tangential information with more reliably sourced detail about White's troubled relationship with his mother and about his early unpublished novels. I have consistently used short footnote citations.

Happy to discuss. Aemilius Adolphin (talk) 04:28, 22 August 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Meade?

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'White, in contrast, disliked Meade's approach to Voss but was enthusiastic about the production of Signal Driver.' Who is Meade? Is it Richard Meale that is meant? 2401:D006:A202:7E00:AC5C:AF68:608D:865B (talk) 00:41, 4 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks for pointing that out. Typo corrected. Aemilius Adolphin (talk) 01:02, 4 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]