Wikipedia:Peer review/The Passion of the Christ/archive1
This article seems to be closing in on featured level. Can anyone check it out and see if there are any gaping errors? Johnleemk | Talk 16:55, 25 Dec 2004 (UTC)
- Intro needs work; the second and third para should be elsewhere ("Commercial success" or some such). A more genuinely introductory couple of lines are needed, summarising the main points of the article. Structure needs work: separate film stuff (cast+crew, title change, role of Gibson in making film happen [which needs expanding], list of Gospel refs present/not) from Reaction (which should be major sections Religious organisations/Film critics/Public) and (probably) from Antisemitism Debate. "Further social criticism" merge with Antisemitism or clarify distinction. Rd232 20:17, 29 Dec 2004 (UTC)
- Just a quick one (I'm tired!). Structure needs work. Half of the page is a list. It won't get through FAC like that. That list needs to be turned into prose: people just don't read lists!!! also, cast and crew should go down the page. - Ta bu shi da yu 18:45, 31 Dec 2004 (UTC)